• Jeff
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  • Posted: Nov 29 08 08:13 PM

Hi all

First of all I’m not sure where to post this, since I don’t think I done, I’m going for here .  The other thing I don’t like is to start off with a disclaimer, but….I had an awful time trying to photograph this.  I just finished working on this and being that the paint is wet, it’s giving me a lot of reflection in the wrong place, like Santa’s left eye.  It looks quite odd in every photo I took, but not in person.  Other than that I’m keeping my other criticisms’ to myself.   Anyway, I would love any thoughts on this.  I’m going for an “oldy world” feeling.  This is oil on 12”x16” canvas.

Thanks for looking.

Jeff

 

OK I worked on this a bit more and am mostly happy with it.  Not sure about Santa’s left eye.  Will let it rest a while…….

Thanks for comments and suggestions.

 

 

 

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Edited 11/30/08   by  Jeff
Edited 11/30/08   by  Jeff
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  • jrjarvis
  • To: Jeff
  • Posted: Nov 29 08 09:46 PM
It does look like a Santa illustration from the 1800's, but a very sophisticated one.  The background needs lightening &/or more information & detail.
 JMHO  jrj
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  • Sharronbox
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  • Posted: Nov 30 08 10:51 AM
Hi Jeff

This is a really nice painting. The hair and fake fur and beard and dog fur are beautifully rendered. Since there is such a strong highlight on Santas nose, maybe you could add a stronger highlight to the top of the glasses on Santa? I think that  would add some sparkle.
- Arrange what pieces come your way. - Virginia Woolf
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  • clickergayle
  • To: Jeff
  • Posted: Nov 30 08 11:34 AM

I think this is delightful , I think I would just put a mere detail of santa's left eye, , but maybe in the original there does show some detail there. Is this your Christmas card for this year.?.

Clickergayle

 

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  • Jeff

Santa’s left eye is there ( a bad photo), but I think I might punch it up just a bit along with the dog’s left eye.  Yes this will be my Christmas card this year.

Thanks for looking.

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